Temca Academy II, Part 13

INT. HELL LOBBY.

They enter into a small lobby that sort of looks like a one window DMV with no chairs. The lobby is empty except for the CLERK. Anielle, George, and Toci walk towards the clerk but are interupted when a man’s spirit (looks like a normal man but is transparent) pops up from the floor. He goes up to the clerk.

CLERK:

Welcome to Hell! Name please.

SPIRIT MAN:

Hell? Why am I here?

CLERK:

I can tell you but first I need your

name.

SPIRIT MAN:

Well, maybe I won’t tell you and

then you gotta send me back!

CLERK:

Let’s see my scheduled deaths today.

The clerk looks at a clipboard.

CLERK:

Ah, you must be Bartholomew Baycity.

You’re here because you robbed a girl

scout, so that’ll be breaking the commandment

against stealing. Plus gluttony since you ate

all her cookies in one weekend.

SPIRIT MAN:

Oh yeah!

CLERK:

You can go to Heaven if you apologize!

SPIRIT MAN:

Never!

CLERK:

(rolls eyes)

Whatever. Room 1112749. Bye!

The Spirit Man gets sucked back down.

CLERK:

Oh, livings! What brings you here

today?

ANIELLE:

A man named Joshua Frederick

was taken captive here by Babelsama

and Madame Fate. We’re here to rescue him.

CLERK:

There’s only three ways you can go down to

Hell. One-if you’re invited by one of our

residences. Two-if you die. And three-if

you go through the tour with one our guides.

Don’t worry, the guides are technically angels-

like me! We choose to work here for the same

reason people choose to be peace officers-to

carry out justice. We live in Heaven though.

TOCI:

Good to know. We’ll do the tour then.

CLERK;

Very well. I’ll send in your guide.

Thanks for dropping by!

A door appears next to the window and out comes Blanche.

BLANCHE:

Wow, I thought I’d never see you

guys again!

GEORGE:

Blanche! But you’re not dead!

BLANCHE:

Someone needs to check the Broom

Football Field! Come-no one will harm

you as long as I’m around.

They reluctantly follow her through the door.

INT. LAYER ONE.

The first layer looks like a giant jungle around the edges with a giant field whose grass is half dead. People are running around, terrified.

BLANCHE:

This is layer one-which punishes crimes

against nature. Their spirits are involved

in a daily hunt where demons chase them

and if they’re caught, they are skinned and

made into the demon’s underwear. This

punishment serves a variety of sins, including

destroying habitats and cruelty to animals.

They see a demon ride across the field on a motorcycle. Blanche leads them down a flight of stairs.

INT. LAYER TWO.

This room looks like a giant movie theatre but again with no seats. People all watch a blank screen.

BLANCHE:

This is crimes against loved ones. Sinners

here are subjected to watch images they

find truly horrific. The sins here are for

people who do something to harm people

who love them-like child abuse or murdering

a spouse to collect the insurance money.

SINNER:

Octomom’s sex tape! Nooooooo!

Blanche leads them downstairs.

INT. LAYER THREE.

This room appears to be a demented, endless obstacle course.

BLANCHE:

Layer three is for sins against nations,

where leaders of any sort get punished

for cruelty to their people. It’s also for

citizens who commit treason or war crimes.

This obstacle course includes swimming

through acid and climbing a mountain of

thorns. There are hundreds of traps like this.

Blanche takes them downstairs again.

INT. LAYER FOUR.

This room appears to be a giant, medieval torture chamber. People cry out in pain and agony.

BLANCHE:

This is punishment for crimes against

humanity. This branch ranges from child

pornography all the way to sociopathic murder.

Blanche takes them downstairs.

INT. LAYER FIVE.

This layer is fire and brimstone. People in the lava try to escape but keep getting impeded by demons.

BLANCHE:

This is what most humans think of

when they think of Hell. It’s for crimes

against God. Basically, it’s a number of

sins done in the name of God. It includes

a sadistic religious group, perverting

religion to justify genocide, and many more.

Blanche leads them downstairs again.

INT. LAYER SIX.

It appears to be a dark, unkempt hotel hall. It looks cold and bleak.

BLANCHE:

This is where sinners can take a short

break. It gives them a chance to ask

forgiveness and relive the horrors of

the day. Some people truly end up sorry

and leave. If you want to continue sinning,

you go back to your layer.

ANIELLE:

Finally! Where does Madame Fate live?

BLANCHE:

This way.

INT. DEMON HALL.

BLANCHE:

This is the residence of demons. See that

ornate building over there? That’s Lucifer’s

room. He runs this place.

ANIELLE:

Great. Will you wait here while we

go take care of something?

BLANCHE:

No problem!

GEORGE:

You are so much more pleasant to

hang around now!

BLANCHE:

I’m an angel; I’m not going to cause

you any discomfort!

They smile at her and step inside Madame Fate’s room.

Advertisements

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s